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carley's progress in the murphy household.

10/28/2014

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a) two parts in the book where Carley persevered over an obstacle would be: 1. the part where Daniel was practicing for basket ball and Carley walked over to help him but he didn't want her help and she said "boo hoo daniel wants his mommy" and Daniel said " at least I have a mom" and I feel like she was very strong in this part because her mom is a very sensitive subject for her.
another part is when she was talking to toni and she was trying to talk to her but toni was not listening but Carley 
b) I would feel lost, because I wouldn't know whats going on with my life because I want to leave, but I don't want to leave and I want toni as a friend but she is pushing me away even though I know she is hurting.
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Alexia
11/3/2014 03:36:26 am

Dear Maayan,
I like how you chose two things that you feel strongly about, and I can tell by your writing that you do. If Carley chose to go back to her mom, how do you think the Murphys would feel?

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Cheyanne
11/3/2014 12:39:57 pm

Hello Maayan,
I can agree with Alexia that you really did a good job on picking two things in the book that you were able understand well. I also liked how you put yourself in Carley's shoes to explain the situation better. I do think you are lacking in grammar here though and it would be if maybe you could go over it to check for grammar mistakes. (Not that you're not doing that) I have a question, how do you think Carley has adjusted to Daniel and preserved by making friends with him.

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